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Mayrand
Joined: 15 Aug 2003 Reviews: 6
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Tue Sep 23, 2003 9:01 am
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It´s kinda hard to leave reviews here!!! it´s the third time I try!!!
Well, not remebering everything I wanted to say anymore, all I wanna tell is that I really liked the first story and am really happy you´re coming up with a sequel.
Now, that I´ve seen it is going to upload, let me elaborate!
Elrohir´s Tale is one of the best fics `ve read (and I´ve had my share, mind you) and I am really looking forward to see what you´ve planned for this. I also really like Glorfindel and your characters are great. So, UPDATE!  |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Sep 23, 2003 10:28 am
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Weeeeeee! It's here, it's here! Sinead is delightful: so juvenile and stubborn and proud. And Glorfindel... well, what can one say? Blond. Heroic. Good with a sword. That is close to perfect elfdom. I love it. |
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Maram68

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 114
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Wed Sep 24, 2003 3:59 pm
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Great kick off, dear Miriel. I am sure this sequel with be as great or even better than its first part!
Good muse and lots of love  |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Oct 22, 2003 1:58 pm
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I love all the inter-elven politics ... that's exactly how I guessed they'd react to a stranger coming into Mirkwood... even an elven stranger. Are you writing Glorfindel as a Noldo or a Vanya? I've heard both theories, and actually, it probably wouldn't make much difference in terms of his reception by Thranduil. If he fought with the Noldo, he'd be counted as one of them. Even though he's blonde and pretty. Anyway, I especially loved this line about Moira: "already the last grains of sand were losing their grip on the slippery sides of her hourglass." Only a half-elf would understand the poignancy and poetry of mortality like this. Nice. |
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kimmaree
Joined: 21 Jun 2003 Reviews: 4
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Sun Nov 09, 2003 6:37 pm
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Hi there - This is shaping up to be a great sequel to what was a wonderful story.
Well done & I eagerly await more
Kimmaree |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003 Reviews: 103
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Wed Nov 12, 2003 3:17 pm
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Thanks for the reviews - I appreciate each and every one.  |
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
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Fri Nov 14, 2003 10:56 am
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I loved 'Elrohir's Tale' so when i saw this was your sequel, i cacked myself! FANTASTIC!!
So far, i love your Thranduil. Perfect and subtle! Sinead and Glorfie are very well written also, very realistic and nicely paced.
The dark elves sub plot is a wee bit confusing but i am intrigued to see where you will take us with them.
I cant wait for you to update!! Please hurry! |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Mon Nov 24, 2003 12:59 pm
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| Second-to-last line of chapter five is absolutely classic. So perfectly elven; even perfectly Thranduil-like in the faint sarcasm. Lovely. |
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Maram68

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 114
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Mon Nov 24, 2003 7:59 pm
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I'll never tell that I already read Chapter Six ... but reading 4 to 6 at once has been a royal treat, my dear!!!
Oh yes, I love the way you are handling it ... and I need more !!!!! |
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
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Tue Nov 25, 2003 4:15 pm
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NO!
Dont stop there!
Great chapter! An excellent intro for a possible Glorfie/Sinead romance (PLEASE!) and nice use of suspense re the mutilations and attacks.
Thranduil is still canonly correct and Sinead is portrayed perfectly. She is just enough without grating into annoying teenybopper and im eager to see you develop her further.
I didnt think the italics would work and i admit to rolling my eyes, however, they really were used in an appropriate way and were a clever insertion!
I cant wait for more!  |
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Last edited by Moralanqua on Tue Nov 25, 2003 9:20 pm |
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