Reviews for "Return to Middle Earth"

Tue Nov 25, 2003 5:47 pm

Okay, so Sinead's a brat. I still like her. Smile smiley face

And Glorfindel is lickable in the extreme. So now does she get to go meet papa? I can just imagine Elrond's reaction. And where is that sword? Has she been practicing with it? Thank you for updating; this story is addictive.

Tue Nov 25, 2003 5:51 pm

Hi there
This was another great chapter & I eagerly await more Smile smiley face

Kimmaree

Wed Nov 26, 2003 10:52 am

Just one thought I have to share with you..... (unfortunately not from me) Does Glorfindel glow all over? Rolling Eyes smiley face

Thu Dec 18, 2003 3:03 pm

My Glorfindel glows all over!!!

Anyway, 'The Prophecy'. Another good chapter. Your views on elven sexuality are very interesting and the info will be a help to understand how Sinead came to be, for those of us who know that bit more on Tolkiens views...

The subplot is getting more interesting! Cant wait to meet the spy!

Randy Thrandy? Oh, yes please! That was saucy and fun!

Sinead is reading less like modern girl and more like child in this chapter. If that is your intention, i think it works nicely as she is becoming more ingrained into ME.

Finally- TWINS!!! About time! Cant wait for the next chapter! Must find out if there will be a love triangle and if Elrohir will meet his baby girl Very Happy smiley face

Thu Jan 08, 2004 2:32 am

that would be an interesting family reunion, Moralanqua. I really like your story Miriel. Glory makes a wonderful nightlight Laughing smiley face

wouldn't mind trading places with her (JK) anyway I can't wait until the next chapter!!

Mon Jan 12, 2004 5:41 am

Yes there will eventually be a reunion. There will eventually be smut (with glow in the dark Glorfindel) More randy Thrandy? Maybe I should write a little spin off? I quite like the wily king myself.. The action is about to begin now, so lean back and hold on tight.

Fri Jan 16, 2004 2:09 pm

Ah, the plot thickens. I adore your characterization of Elladan, by the way. I can so see him humming dirty bar-room songs under his breath. So appropriate for a peredhel. Wink smiley face

And Lego as the fierce protector: yummy. Just yummy.

Tue Jan 20, 2004 5:46 pm

This is a great story! I read 'Elrohir's Tale' a while ago and I liked it a lot - it's great to read the sequel now Smile smiley face

I like your characters, they are quite realistic. Update soon! Wink smiley face

Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:46 pm

I love this sequel. Your characterizations and plot development are great. Morality among the elves is proving thought provoking. Please update soon.

Wed Feb 11, 2004 1:02 pm

I love this! Could it be better than the original?! I loved the characterisation of Thranduil and Elladan, not quite how everyone imagine them, but with a unique streak. I'm quite flattered to see a hint of a Legomance there between Sinead and Legolas, but the way he talked about not falling in love was very good, a valid explanation.

You have some small mistakes here regarding spellings of Elven names, and also, in the last chapter, you say the 'Vanya' locked up Morgoth in the void, which i think you mean 'Valar': vanya were a race of Elves, like the noldor and the teleri.

PLEASE update. When I read Elrohir's Tale, it had been completed, and I spent all night finishing it. What a wonderful surprise to see there's a sequel! From Elf in Modern earth, we have the girl in Middle Earth. It does border on the Mary Sue-ish, but with your writing talent and knowledge of Tolkien, it is truely fantastic to read.

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