Reviews for "Return to Middle Earth"

Mon Feb 16, 2004 5:27 pm

I've gotta tell you, ive never been a big fan of the "elf in our time" story line but i loved Elohir's Tale loved it, and its because it was so brilliantly written. It was believable.

Imagine how excited i was to see a sequel involving Sinead. Very Happy smiley face

And Glorfindel - the super elf. Can wait to see what happens between them. And the Twins, and Legolas and the Elf king himself (loved the wench scene by the way).

I am looking forward to seeing where this story will end up......

Pip

Mon Feb 16, 2004 9:08 pm

please, please, please continue to write. I really do look forward to more...

Mon Feb 16, 2004 10:38 pm

I am still here reading and very much enjoying your story - I eagerly await more Very Happy smiley face

Kimmaree

Tue Feb 17, 2004 12:59 am

Yay! An update!

This chapter was structured differently from your norm. It works well! Smile smiley face

Sinead is really a bit of a trusting dumbass. Im screaming at her to run! Why would she leave Randy Thrandy anyway? Daft thing!

I need more Glorfindel! I think the budding romance is being handled well and the pace is spot on. Its believable and horny! Twisted Evil smiley face

I think you need to quicken or tighten the three subplots tho. They are starting to lose their sharpness and the Avari dudes are getting tired. Thats it. No other complaints!

Hurry up with the porn!

Tue Feb 17, 2004 8:18 pm

Loved the politics. Loved mindspeak intrigue. Loved wily/sweet thranduil. Loved loved loved legolas.
characterization is darn near perfect. The fic stood at the edge in the first few chappies because of the excess of 'accessories', so to speak, but you have pulled it off very well. Thank you for the time and trouble. LOVE it.
did I mention I love it? Cool smiley face

Thu Feb 19, 2004 2:21 pm

I'm still reading it and I still think it's a great story Smile smiley face

Update as soon as you can!

Sat Feb 21, 2004 1:41 am

Miriel, this is a very creative story and I'm impressed with it. I wish I'd wandered over and read it sooner now. I think the characters are well done and each have their own appeal. And I loved Glorfindel's nod to Abraham Lincoln there, about letting Elves think you're a fool rather than remaining and removing all doubt. Very Happy smiley face

Classic.

Mon Mar 01, 2004 4:51 pm

Great story, IMHO it's better then Elohir's Tale. Your writting has improved and I'm lovin the plot! Looking forwards to the next chapter.

Tue Mar 09, 2004 1:03 am

Can you believe that I spent one month to write this review and now that I'm doing it, I still cannot find the words that could describe such wonderful fiction? Crazy smiley face

You surpassed yourself, because this sequel is getting even better than Elrohir's tale. Bow smiley face

I'm dying to read the chapter where he finally meets his daughter. Your characterizations are perfect and I loved the way you found to make Elves have sex and not to bond. Clever writer, I love this! And Glorfindel is so sexy... I had to say, I couldn't stop myself, sorry. Update soon, you are doing a wonderful job! Bounce smiley face

Thu Mar 11, 2004 4:40 am

I dont need to write anything but give you the key to Glorfindels Room. I promised id let you play with him if you updated. Very Happy smiley face

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