Reviews for "A Moment Stolen"

Thu Nov 16, 2006 5:28 pm

Awww Rous, I wonder how many offspring they have if they feel that they should really steal a moment. Rhis small peak in their lives is very sweetly drabbled.

Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:11 pm

Well, at this point, I think they only have two, and one is adopted. So, they have a lot of practicing to do. And, with both of them working and trying to raise kids, you know how finding time can be.

Thank you for reviewing. I was beginning to think this was really bad. I know it is not smutty enough, but I did not think it was really that heinous.

Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:01 pm

Love this line: "His clothes were falling as fast as Orcs at Mordor." That's just the sort of metaphor Haldir the warrior would think. It's hard to get into the head of a character when you just have 100 words to work with, but that sort of interior imagery is exactly what does it.

Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:25 am

*giggle*

Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:10 am

Nicely captured moment. Very sweet and suggestive Smile smiley face

Thanks for sharing. I liked it a lot.

Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:18 am

A beautiful moment of marital happiness. Very sweet.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie

Mon Jan 01, 2007 9:23 am

Oooo.......very nice!

Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:56 am

This is cute. I would like to see a longer version. Man I would like to be in her shoes.

keep writing,

phatangelbaby

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