Beautiful imagery in this. Very erotic for such a short piece, nicely crafted.
FatiferousPoet
Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:18 pm
That is beautifuly writtenl Rhaps! Well done and crafted with power.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:47 pm
This is very sensuous, and it reads like a song straight from the heart of a bard, composed to praise her beloved muse Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.