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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Sun Nov 26, 2006 9:38 pm
Ooooh... Nice Dark Phoenix.... and poor description in her mind of Scott! Heheee... as I like Summers.... I got irked at her calling him a yuppie scum and pretty boy! LMAO. That means ya did good there Author!!! Nice drabble!!

(P.S. Might want to consider putting in the description that this might be a spoiler alert for some.)

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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:29 am
Sweet. I just love the Phoenix. She so bad. I thought the movie was a little abrupt with poor Cyclops' fate, but your succint line "bits of ash" captured the abruptness with a lot more poetry than the movie itself.
 
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trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004
Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
Thu Nov 30, 2006 3:35 pm
Eeeep! Dark Phoenix is rather frightening here in her dismissal and disinterest in life.. especially one that is special to the other half of her existence. Definitely agree with the other reviewers... works with the abruptness of Scott's end. *sigh*

As a slight nitpicky but you know it is always good for concrit, the first sentence had me wondering if an 'a' was missing between "never" and "moment".

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