Reviews for "More than Mithril"
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varialectio
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: Barad-dur.
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Tue Mar 23, 2004 9:06 pm
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Why hasn't anyone else reviewed this story?? I enjoyed it a great deal, and am eagerly awaiting the finale. What happens next?? Seeing as how the Mouth of Sauron is one of my favorite characters, I really like it that you have him in a significant role; I see so little fanfic out there that features him in a meaningful way. So... please, ma'am, I want some more!
(One tiny little word of Constructive Critiscism: I do think that the Mouth of Sauron cracking Frodo's skull, or planning on trying it, was a tad over the top. After all, a skull injury is a very serious wound that could lead to death... and the Mouth was ordered to keep Frodo alive. Breaking the poor hobbit's noggin could lead to a coma or worse, so we really need to know how the Mouth would prevent this from happening. Again, update, please?  :wink |
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Silvae
Joined: 28 Nov 2004
Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
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Tue Feb 22, 2005 10:35 am
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Yup, this is a v.v. interesting story - can't wait for the next update! I like the way you included quotes from ROtK at the beginning of each chapter... because I've always found it a bit weird that Frodo was never even hit that much, if I recall, let alone tortured! Anyway, just as a bit of concrit, my memory must be addled, but I don't remember Sam being out of action for two whole days...just my two cents' worth (for all the good that'll do for you). Happy writing!  |
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