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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Dec 01, 2006 11:41 am

I'm not very familiar with this show, Rhapsody, but you gave me a very clear character and scene here. Good job!
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Dec 01, 2006 8:09 pm

:: waves to shake said pom poms ::

Hehee... yes, you did a very good job. I really like the idea of these two in a spar. Very diff. types of opponents and I want to see what happens further in their session.
 
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Kendra

Joined: 01 Jul 2003
Reviews: 46
Location: USA
Wed Dec 06, 2006 2:11 am

Nicely done! I could just hear Sheppard's thoughts in his voice as he was watching this display, I could also well imagine that little smirk on his face too. And the last line...so Sheppard!! You left me wanting more!

Kendra
 
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airplane

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:44 am

Woohoo!! Stargate! Stargate fic written by you, kicking!
You so captured it, Teyla does look like she's dancing when she fights...so beautiful...
 
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