Reviews for "A Lover's Declaration"
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:04 pm
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Wow, powerful stuff. I'm always amazed when people can pull off a really sensual, evocative scene in only 100 words, but this really manages so well! And, in amongst the general impact of the kiss, you also manage to convey the sense of this coming at long last, in keeping with the plot of the film, which is great.
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Tue Dec 12, 2006 5:00 pm
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Wow...hot stuff. That was erotically teasing. I love it. Can we have more?  |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:14 am
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I'm not very familiar with this fandom, yet I'd like to say that I really love your drabble. You've built such a sensual, hot scene using only 100 words, and I find it amazing. Excellently written 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:54 am
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| Wow. That's one intense moment for 100 words. Awesome. |
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