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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:04 pm

Wow, powerful stuff. I'm always amazed when people can pull off a really sensual, evocative scene in only 100 words, but this really manages so well! And, in amongst the general impact of the kiss, you also manage to convey the sense of this coming at long last, in keeping with the plot of the film, which is great.
SW
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Tue Dec 12, 2006 5:00 pm

Wow...hot stuff. That was erotically teasing. I love it. Can we have more? Very Happy smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Dec 30, 2006 4:14 am

I'm not very familiar with this fandom, yet I'd like to say that I really love your drabble. You've built such a sensual, hot scene using only 100 words, and I find it amazing. Excellently written Very Happy smiley face

Binka
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:54 am

Wow. That's one intense moment for 100 words. Awesome.
 
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