Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Wed Dec 13, 2006 11:58 am
Very nice series - the one thing that really stood out to me was the way each drabble led onto the next, even though the focus of the 'sense' had shifted. Really clever work!
SW
ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:38 pm
THis was wonderful! I loved the 6 senses and how you played upon all of them. The last one was so dark and ominous in spite of what she did to try not to think about her impending loss. Well done!
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Tue Dec 19, 2006 4:24 am
I already told you how much I like these drabbles, to me it feels as if it can span their lives together or it can happen during the evening. Amrod loves his lady deeply in a very sensual way, but there is such internal struggle underneath Greatly drabbled Isil!