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Ekard
Joined: 22 Nov 2007
Reviews: 3
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Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:17 am

This story is so good! I find it odd that *any* elves survived the encounter, but this is so good I feel giddy. Please update, and know that I am checking this every week.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:41 pm

I just finished reading your story in one go; I simply couldn't stop. What a gripping, fantastic horror story you have written! And I, being a die-hard fan of "Aliens" (yes, I particularly love the second movie, then the first, and the third. I don't like the fourth though) really aprreciate your effort to set the morbid, overhelming mood of terror. The story is action-packed, and stronly reminds me of the second movie in that regard (the small girl reminds me of Newt), but the hunt and the trap -- of "Nostromo" and "Alien 3". And you combined the ideas with LotR excellently.

Terrific, smoothly written story, and I sincerely hope that you are going to continue. Bah, what a cliffhanger! Please, update. I'll be watching this.

Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Cheers,
Binka
 
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Arienwen

Joined: 01 Nov 2007
Reviews: 1
Location: St. Petersburg
Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:36 pm

You take horror to a whole new extreme. I love it. So many people can attempt such stories and they don't give the right amount of fear, anxiety, and other emotions necessary. You had me mesmerized by this, so much so that when my cat hopped into my lap for a pat, I jumped and let out a yelp. That is a hard thing to do. Well done. Smile smiley face

~~Arienwen~~
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:01 pm

Ah, thank you for updating. Excellent chapters; firstly, the battle, full of terror, fear and action -- I love how you've written the viewpoints. Then, the quieter final one.

Great, great job! Thank you for writing this story.

All the best,
Binka
 

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