Reviews for "Out of Shadow and Death"

Thu Dec 28, 2006 9:51 am

This is a very intriguing beginning, and I'm very curious as to how the story will unfold. Very snappy dialog. I found it a little uneven, though - too heightened in some places, as with your OFC's, and too dampened in others, as in the Grangers' response to murders in their living room.

Wed Jan 03, 2007 1:23 pm

Good start. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Tue Mar 20, 2007 9:00 pm

Did I never officially review this? Oops.

An intriguing start, I must say. I find the world in which Rowling places her characters very interesting, but in the movies and the books I can only get "into it" so far, because my taste tends to run toward the sort of adult themes that would render her work no longer so appropriate for children. This story takes several steps into that darker side of the HP world, and I like it there.

Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:32 pm

Ooooh... please post the next chapter soon. That was really good. Am looking forward to more.

Mon May 18, 2009 12:47 am

Wow. This is a really interesting answer to the question of American magic users in Rowling's universe. I'm excited to see where you take this. I do have a slight criticism, though, because to an American very familiar with the Appalachian area, the dialogue seems a little off. I'd be happy to beta for you, if you'd like, before you post more, which I hope will be soon.

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