Reviews for "October Twilight"

Wed Jan 03, 2007 3:58 pm

Please update soon, I'm really enjoying it.

Tue Jan 09, 2007 11:51 am

Vana, this is terrific. I am really impressed with your seamless entry into J. K. Rowling's world, but most of all with your restraint: Dumbledore says only what's necessary, and your characters act and interact only to enrich the story. Your Dorcas is a wonderfully full character, with no heavy notes at all. I will eagerly await more.

Wed Jan 10, 2007 10:54 am

Is it wrong of me to want a new chapter right away? That was really good, I love the switching between flash backs and "present time". Keep it up!

Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:35 pm

I have been procrastinating for days now over writing a final review for this story, but I really can't find an adequate way to express just how very much I have enjoyed reading it. I'm thinking of printing it out and putting it on the shelf next to my HP novels. I waited eagerly for each and every chapter, and sometimes stopped halfway through to draw out the experience and stay in Dorcas's world as long as possible. I loved all your characterizations of the young OoP members, but Dorcas the most. You managed a nice balancing act between her cleverness and self-ignorance which was compelling and endearing, and I was truly moved at your conjuring of life during wartime - a poignant reminder of what many face in the real world everyday. The ceremony at Hogwarts recognizing those students killed over break was particularly sad and touching.

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Reviews for "October Twilight"