Reviews for "Smoke and Shadow"

Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:52 pm

I think you're doing a wonderful job with this story! I love Lothiriel/Eomer stories.

I see that it is unfinished, but you seem to skip over a lot of detail that would otherwise give the story flare. you know? like the meat and potatoes of it?
also, I think if you got more in depth with the characters emotions, it would bring more dimension to the story.

but other than that i think it's fantastic! i really enjoyed it so far!

Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:23 pm

I give it an A+. but um.....

are they gonna start liking eachother soon?

Tue Jan 09, 2007 11:36 am

This is going really well, Selene. Your imagination of Rohan is extraordinarly deep and broad, as our your characterizations of Lothiriel and Eomer. I am eager to see where you take this.

Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:02 am

This is a wonderful story. I liked the way you haved developed Eomer's character. A little more development of Lothiriel's character would be good, but I think that you are a very talented writer!

Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:27 pm

Oh you must update quickly after this cliffhanger! Smile smiley face

I like how you've portrayed them growing to know and care for one another. It's a realistic view of how an arranged marriage with so much riding on it could play out. Please update quickly. Smile smiley face

Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:48 am

Well, I've finally caught up with this story after being completely away from my computer due to school for a while...and I must say, I'm impressed! I've read (and am reading) quite a few stories about Eomer and Lothiriel, but yours has a fresh aspect to it, which makes it delightful to read!
I think it would be nice to see how the dispute between the Dunledings and Rohirrim would end, at least with a truce of somesort. Lothiriel has made the first step by helping Beorn's brother, but other steps need to be made too...and I think Eomer won't like it that much, which could give some interesting aspects...*g*

Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:37 pm

I really love Eomer and Lothieriel stories, yours is no exception. I'm glad they are finally making efforts to get to know one another instead of just doing their duty to produce an heir. Keep going with the character development. Love the regular updates also.

Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:25 pm

This chapter was great - as all the others.
I check in for this story everyday. You have a talent for writing. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:33 pm

Just recently discovered this site. Love your story so far. Looking forward to more.

dogreign

Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:53 pm

This is wonderful. I see it's been a while since you've updated. I hope you haven't abandoned this. It's too good to be left!

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