Reviews for "Coming Home"

Tue Sep 30, 2003 5:09 am

I really like this, I like the imagery you've created through it, I can just see it, but are you going to write more? I'd love to see some from the POV of Sam/Frodo/Pippen, etc. but great work, well written.

Tue Sep 30, 2003 11:55 am

So poignant, so wise ... I always admire stories where more is implied than written and this is a good example. One really feels for Merry here, in many ways the canniest of the four hobbits, and here appropriately disillusioned and jaded, but recoverable. well done.

Wed Oct 01, 2003 8:33 am

Ania said
> I really like this, I like the imagery you've created through it, I can just see it, but are you going to write more? I'd love to see some from the POV of Sam/Frodo/Pippen, etc. but great work, well written.

**Yes, I'm working on more and all our friends will enventually step in.

Tue Jan 06, 2004 4:54 pm

I'm sorry to hear that you have run out of ideas. I have been following this story since you began it. I hope that inspiration strikes soon as I would love to see an end. I think you have done a wonderful job so far!

Wed Jan 07, 2004 10:26 am

Definately not out of ideas! Too many if anything, my notebook/binder overfloweth!!! Just need more work on this little bit to make it all it could be!

Thanks for the reviews everybody! More to come soon.

Fri Mar 05, 2004 1:50 am

I am so excited every time you update! Keep up the good work and don't keep us on the edge of out seats for too long!

Sun Apr 04, 2004 10:49 am

Delightful! I have read a lot of the 'Merry and Pippin' crew's works - as I call the lot of you, LOL! (do you guys have a name?) - and have never ceased to be delighted. The level of canon-truth is excellent and the story detail and plausibility is just a joy! Yours is no exception. I am SO glad you found my works and in turn introduced me to yours! Thank you! On to read the next!

Ariel

Fri Jul 23, 2004 3:29 pm

I’m very glad that this story was pointed out to me as it has been an extremely enjoyable read. As I’ve said before, I never used to care much for Hobbit stories on the whole, but I think now I am converted. This tackles something I’ve thought about a lot; how the Hobbits of the fellowship tried to adapt to living in the Shire again after all they’ve seen, and this story captured it beautifully. Poor Merry! But all the characters really were expertly done and the whole thing just has a lovely feel to it. Well done.

Thu Dec 02, 2004 9:18 pm

This was my first time ever reading a hobbit story. I came into it with the idea that I would stop reading after the first chapter, but you really drew me in. In fact, I think you've ruined me for other hobbit writers. I'm a PEF, and that's about all I read and write. However, I will be taking a look at your other stories very soon.

Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:18 pm

"More happened here than you could know, Merry" ... I've only read the first chapter, but this line sets up a mystery and certainly makes me want to read on. What exactly did happen while the boys were off drinking ent draught and playing hero?

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