Reviews for "Child of Gondor and Rohan"

Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:32 am

This is a very fresh-feeling story and you take us into the 4th age and show us the special bond between brother and sister & brothers. The family dynamics are interesting despite the modernisms in the story which feel oddly there. Sixteen children, good Lord! It reminds me of Pride & Prejudice, although Aragorn forgetting names of his daughters? Hmmm. I think you would benefit greatly if you would find a beta to help you out with several things, for example with formatting, point of views, canon and such.

Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:40 pm

I find this story quite delightful as is, i wish there was more chapters read but if not this chapter is memorable

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "Child of Gondor and Rohan"