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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Mon Jan 15, 2007 11:34 am
I liked this very much! I especially liked how you portray Faramir as someone who doesn´t need to whip or threaten others to gain respect.

Thanks for sharing!
 
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004
Reviews: 57
Location: UK
Tue Jan 16, 2007 1:25 am
This was just beautiful and so very Faramir.
 
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Astara
Joined: 28 Apr 2004
Reviews: 10
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Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:13 pm
You nicely captured that 'sleeping strength' based on sound ethics which is so easy to underestimate, especially as it's often taken for weakness.
 
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Lilan

Joined: 28 Mar 2005
Reviews: 23
Location: Ukraine
Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:03 am
Heheh...I guess I have a suggestion for this one: in the bit "’twas the look in his eyes" I think it would be better to write "The Look." *giggles*

And yes, the point that Faramir is cool comes across really well here!
 
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