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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Tue Sep 30, 2003 2:21 am

Very beautiful songfic.

You did it well.
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
Location: 
Wed Oct 01, 2003 5:14 am

Lovely, sweet and beautifully character drive. Well Done!
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Sun Dec 19, 2004 5:15 am

The transitions from present to past & back again were the only thing I had a problem with. They need to be set off, either by italicizing or longer spaces between the segments.

Using Aragorn's cold is a good device to draw in the reader--who hasn't spent a night with that awful hunger for air?
 
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domeair

Joined: 20 Sep 2005
Reviews: 7
Location: In Mirkwood with Legolas\"wink\"wink\"
Thu Sep 29, 2005 4:22 pm

I love it! It is a sweet story with a beutiful song. I would like to read more of your stories. Very Happy smiley face
 
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