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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Wed Oct 08, 2003 8:58 am
Lovely, gorgeous, wonderful story that sits beautifully within the Empty Vessel series. Your OCs are well drawn and integrated within the world of Middle Earth, and I eagerly await each updated chapter that appears. Well Done! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
Tue Feb 03, 2004 6:36 pm
This is my favorite of your little short fics, Zee. Absolutely perfect, in character, and brilliantly done. Great job!
--Julie
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Aug 31, 2004 5:47 am
I like the characterizations, but I have some problems with some of the phrasing. Too modern. While I understand that they would have idioms, much as we do, I really cannot see someone from ME saying, 'duh'. I did appreciate the struggles portrayed. I could feel the pain. That was very well done. Perhaps I should go and read the other parts. This did intrigue me.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:01 am
I did go and read a few of your other pieces.
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:24 pm
I liked this little vignette, another perfect companion piece to The Empty Vessel. Smile smiley face
 
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