Joined: 07 Jul 2004 Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:41 pm
awww poor Claire! I love Heroes and I felt so horrible when Zach lost his memory. I can only imagine Claire's gut-wrenching emotions when she found out the one person she could trust had been lost. I think you captured that very well, especially her growing feelings for him.
SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sun Mar 25, 2007 4:39 pm
I wanted to hold off reading this because Heroes only just started over here in the UK, but it was worth the wait. I have to echo all that Trek has said - I loved how you captured the mood and so much emotion in so few words. I love the show and it was a real pleasure reading this little look at the characters.
SW
Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:47 pm
Excellent! I can imagine that Claire would worry over this loss, even among all the others she is faced with. She seemed to hold her unexpected friendship with Zach very closely, and then it was just snatched away. Please write more Heroes stuff!