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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Feb 05, 2007 7:48 am

This piece shines in its brilliance of emotional power and angst. Thank you for giving us such a poignant view on Legolas emotions, anger and fears. Legolas always feels so collected, but as the storm rises, sweeps over and calms down, we get the same feeling when it comes down to Legolas inner turmoil. I love the way how you write the contrasts of the storm as a symbol going around him, while Legolas feelings are just as strong on the inside in equal power. This is beautifully crafted Isil, the balance is just superb on many levels!
 
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Jael

Joined: 18 May 2005
Reviews: 13
Location: USA, Wisconsin
Fri Feb 09, 2007 6:02 pm

"When his tears ceased, and he was composed again, they walked back to the caverns in comforting silence."

Er, from the Carrock, near the Anduin? That's quite a distance for a leisurely stroll. Over 150 miles, quickly eyeballing from the map. Other than the little distance anomaly, a beautifully written, evocative story.
 
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