Reviews for "To The keep! The tale of Haldir of Lorien at Helms Deep"

Wed Feb 28, 2007 6:03 pm

I don't mean to critisize but it's Mandos not Manros and how could Haldir jump on a horse if he was injured so badly?

Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:49 pm

This is not put together very well. One minute, he's dead and the next he's jumped up and galloping away. You need to clean up the formatting as well.

Nice try though. A lot of us would like to see Haldir survive Helm's Deep.

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Reviews for "To The keep! The tale of Haldir of Lorien at Helms Deep"