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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Thu Mar 01, 2007 2:04 pm

I thought this was an excellent short piece that really captured each of the three characters very well. Nicely done!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Mar 01, 2007 4:32 pm

Excellent story, Pen - great characterizations, the voices of each wonderully individualized, and you really found a wonderful moment of convergance I haven't seen explored (or even pointed out) anywhere else. Really great.
 
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