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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:16 pm
Interesting perspective; a while ago we had a challenge here to write about a "Tragic/Stupid/Crazy Guy". This story would have fit right in. Poor foolhardy Arvedui!

Please take a moment to reformat it, though, it is very difficult to read. And look into getting a Beta reader. Your work is rife with typos.
 
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SAURON
Joined: 20 Feb 2007
Reviews: 3
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Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:36 pm
NancyBrooke said
Interesting perspective; a while ago we had a challenge here to write about a "Tragic/Stupid/Crazy Guy". This story would have fit right in. Poor foolhardy Arvedui!

Please take a moment to reformat it, though, it is very difficult to read. And look into getting a Beta reader. Your work is rife with typos.

Thank you! And yes, I am holding job interviews for a beta reader in the near future. just Pop me an e-mail if interested!
SAURON
 
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