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eyesofsky
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Reviews: 5
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Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:40 am

Beautiful intentions but the shifting of tenses mid-sentence let you down.
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:37 pm

Very sweet piece for Harry - and I can see him being upset from lack of simple human fellowship. This was categorized as an AU, however I sort of see it as the summer that Dumbledore and his friends would not contact him. After GoF and before OotP. Smile smiley face Hopefully Hedwig will take pity and chirp a few notes at him.
 
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