Reviews for "You Do Approve, Don't You?"

Thu Mar 15, 2007 3:54 pm

Well done. Nice to see things from Ron's perspective for a change.

Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:17 pm

Love the whole thing from Ron's perspective, interwoven at the beginning with the play-by-play from the match. I don't get Quidditch game mechanics, but this seemed like a really well-done sports scene. I didn't feel lost (and sometimes I do, even when JK writes it).

There's a long stretch of dialogue-only in the middle that could use a little narrative filler. Even a few "he said" and "she said" bits would help break up the monotonous string of dialogue.

The last few sentences, that bring us right back full-circle into Ron's head, were a nice touch. Very enjoyable read, overall!

Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:46 pm

Very well written story! Heh... you almost made me like Harry/Ginny, as much as I HATED that pairing in both HBP and DH. LOL.

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Reviews for "You Do Approve, Don't You?"