Reviews for "Letting Go"

Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:35 pm

I don't think I've ever seen a story about Ingwe *thinks...* So extra points for writing an underrepresented character Smile smiley face

Well, this short story is a very nicely crafted portrayal of a king, a father who had seen his people grow and become powerful and unique in their own fashion, and now he had to step aside to let his son lead them to battle. You've conveyed Ingwe's concerns and doubts very well.

This was a touching tale, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

All the best,
Binka

Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:06 pm

Binka said it best concerning Ingwe. What I liked even more was how you portrayed his wife. (and nicely danced around the fact that we do not know her name). I liked her calming words and especially her logic. What is that saying about what is behind every successful man?

Oh and a Mark Twain award for "A passionate while later" Elegant. Several paragraphs sumed up in 4 words without lessening the impact.

Well Done.

Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:21 am

LOVED this story so much! You hardly see fics about Ingwe and it captured the spirit of how he was indeed referenced in the books. Really enjoyed this!

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