Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Apr 13, 2007 2:24 am
You captured the nature of fire and portrayed Curufin really well in this drabble. This is a great response to the challenge. Thank you for sharing
trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004 Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
Fri Apr 13, 2007 12:41 pm
This was certainly one of those intense amazing pieces that just pops out of one's head absolutely perfectly. I'm honored you let me have a looksie before as a beta. So dark and creepy, gave me shivers when I first read it!
LydiaB
Joined: 19 Nov 2005 Reviews: 68
Location: Russia
Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:39 am
The fire motif really works and gives this drabble a wonderful poetic beauty. Good stuff!
Istarnie
Joined: 15 Sep 2006 Reviews: 25
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 6:21 pm
Very thought provoking! I love the way you have played with fire here!