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derakh
Joined: 20 Jun 2003
Reviews: 20
Location: Salem, Oregon
Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:10 pm
Intriguing start. Smile smiley face

You write very well, and this story has the potential to go almost anywhere - which is nice. Smile smiley face

Please update soon.
 
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Reviews: 64
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Tue Apr 17, 2007 7:55 pm
I am really enjoying this story! It is so good! I have always wondered if orcs were so very bad when there was no evil force to make them evil. I wonder what this orc's story is. Some of this chapter reminded me of beauty and the beast.
 
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LadyObsidian
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Reviews: 4
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:45 pm
This is truly amazing. You are both original and an excellent writer. Please put more chapters on- I've never seen anything like it!
 
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LadyObsidian
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Reviews: 4
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Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:45 pm
This is truly amazing. You are both original and an excellent writer. Please put more chapters on- I've never seen anything like it!
 
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Bay
Joined: 24 Sep 2004
Reviews: 15
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:45 pm
Love this. Keep writing!
 
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Reviews: 64
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Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:56 pm
I really enjoyed chapter 3. Ulfakh is such a neat character and I like their uneasy friendship.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:57 pm
"A savage Beren to her mortal Luthien."

Indeed Smile smiley face What an accurate description.

This is a very captivating story. Your writing flows smoothly and makes a reader forget about the whole world. I hope to see the next chapter soon Smile smiley face Consider me hooked.

Best wishes,
Binka
 
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orist
Joined: 28 Feb 2006
Reviews: 40
Location: The Prancing Pony
Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:32 am
This isn't the first "good orc" story I've read(second actually) but I'm very interested. Ulfakh is providing stiff competition for Canohando from another story. And this DOES have a feel of "Beauty and the Beast", but with a Middle Earth twist. Very original plot line. I'm a captive audience!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:44 pm
And now I wonder what is going to happen because, well, someone may see them together or may just spot Ulfakh around Lynneth's cottage. I don't think they'd consider an Uruk a friendly creature. I'm looking forward to reading the next part Smile smiley face

Great stuff Very Happy smiley face
 
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Reviews: 64
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Mon Apr 23, 2007 5:30 pm
Wow. Great chapter, Christine. I never thought orc sex could sound appealing. Somehow I think that Thrandor could pose trouble later.
 
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