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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005 Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
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Wed Apr 25, 2007 6:36 pm
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The premise was just so unusual I had to read it, and I'm glad I did. This is a superbly constructed romantic tale, regardless of who and what the characters are, but with that factored in it becomes doubly impressive. To be honest, at one time I would have thought that the words "Uruk-hai" and "sex" would best stay as far away from each other, but you've changed my mind. You allow the reader to see Ulfakh as the complex and fascinating person Lynneth knows him to be. Very nice!  |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 6:16 pm
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"When she awoke the next morning, he was gone."
Somehow, I knew it was going to end like this. But I didn't expect it was going to end so soon. Ah, what a moving, sad chapter. Thank you for sharing this story with us. It was a pleasure to read.
A sequel, or something like that, pretty please...?
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cookienut

Joined: 13 Apr 2007 Reviews: 15
Location: Milky Way
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Fri Apr 27, 2007 9:20 pm
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This is was great. Very original, unique, and well written.
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 12:04 am
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| Oh! So sad! What a great chapter! I had anxiously been waiting for your next chapter wanting to hear more about the morning after. I hope this isn't the end of Ulfakh and Lynneth, but where could they live undisturbed? |
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005 Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
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Sat May 05, 2007 8:33 pm
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| And what a heartbreaking ending! Their affair ended how it had to, instead of lasting like they - and I - wanted it to, which made it all the more poignant. Wonderfully done. |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Thu Feb 21, 2008 1:26 pm
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| Once again I'm crying. Wonderful story, well done. *sniffles* |
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ZeeDrippyVessel

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 95
Location: deep south
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Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:45 pm
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| I read this... elsewhere... and fell in love with an Urak hai. I never EVER thought I would cry for such a love, but I have and it's ALL your fault! |
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