Reviews for "The Valar’s Atonement"

Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:30 pm

Very interesting. When's the next update? Wink smiley face

Wed May 02, 2007 12:44 pm

I've never reviewed anyones work before and really don't feel I'm qualified to give my opinion since I have only read and not written. However, I do feel this story deserves more than one review so here it goes.

This story caught my interest because it seems different from the others I've read here so far. I'm interested in seeing how she's going to interact with people that don't speak the same language. I'm also drawn to the story because she is reacting in a way I think is more real than anything I've seen so far. She's terrified and really, who wouldn't be? It makes it more real for me that they will have to earn her trust instead of her just giving it to them.

Great job....please continue.

Sat May 26, 2007 12:42 am

I have already reviewed but wished to let you know that the story still holds my interest. Thank you for sharing your talent.
I look forward to seeing this story progress.

Wed May 30, 2007 9:41 pm

Good chapter. I am glad she realizes that she is not in Kansas anymore without having to run into any yrch.

Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:03 pm

As you can see we are all waiting!! I think we have been very, very patient. Is there any chance of this amazing story being finished ? I hope you haven't lost you inspiration! Please update!! Hugs Tinwen

Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:26 pm

Excellent character development and they ring true. I hope you will continue with this. I am interested to see how you develop it.

Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:24 pm

Please continue this story. I was captivated the whole way through.

Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:33 pm

Very well written and I am sure you have evolved further since your last update. Hey, you should always finish what you start, so give it a go. You are really good!

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