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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:24 am

This was so 'Mal' in tone and voice! And I always had a thing for him and Inara so it was good to see a little exploration of that here. I think you captured the atmosphere and characters perfectly!

SW
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Thu Apr 26, 2007 11:30 am

Mal and his girls Very Happy smiley face I think in this piece I love the way how Zoe is written and is shining through the most. It's funny actually, in the tv-show she never really made a huge impression on here, but in written word I just love her. A great balance, great inner dialogue and delightfully Mal!
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:41 pm

Do I really get to be the first one to say it? Do I?

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I heard Mal's voice in my head while I was reading this, which as far as I'm concerned proves that you captured him just right. And the way the events and moments described fluttered by made them seem like memories, specifically his memories, which really helped to put me in the right flashback mindset for this kind of story. Very nice.
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Fri Apr 27, 2007 2:18 pm

Yup, that's the Captain. Smile smiley face Will there be more along these lines? I'd be interested to see some Nancy-written gap filling between the series and the film. I like your Zoe too, and there's always fun to be had with Wash. Bravo.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sat Apr 28, 2007 1:13 am

Excellent. I could totally hear Mal saying all of it. You write like Whedon. Oh, yes.
 
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