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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Mon Jul 23, 2007 3:31 am
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| I could weep reading this tory, but it will end in tragedy eventually, won't it? oh, dear oh, dear oh, dear. |
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Dulcinea

Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Reviews: 64
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 5:22 pm
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Thanks so much for the new chapter! It was great Can't wait for more! |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:57 pm
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| OOhhhh! This is so good! Who would have believed Sauron could have a heart and who could be passionate too! Her compassion for him and to look past his scars to love him for who he is is beautiful. Thank you for this update. Looking forward to the rest. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:59 am
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*collects pieces of herself from the ground to stich herself together*
Bravo! A very very inte4resting and captivating story! Much like your other one, I am captured in the nets of the web you weave. Brilliant! To show Sauron in a way we never knew him before, that he can love, is capable of such tender emotions, even though he seeks to destroy Middle Earth...I don't think there are words which can do this story justice!
Am looking forward to reading the next chapter XD |
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MMC
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Reviews: 10
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Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:46 pm
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| Glad to see that you have continued this story. I was afraid that you had given up on it. |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
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Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:17 pm
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| That was so beautifull. They bonded and remained to together forever. The rings that were intertwined reminded me of a story I read as a child. You might recognize it. It is the story of the balarina and the toy soldier with one leg. IN the end they both went into the fireplace. They both became one...a heart from the ashes when the fire cooled. It was one of my favorite stories when I was young. But for both Sauron's and Lithiniel I would think it was not the end for them but rather a beggining. Maybe back in Valinor where they could both be forgiven? Or Maybe still in Mandos awaiting to be reborn again? |
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005 Reviews: 161
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Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:18 pm
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| By the way I'll take the cookies with red wine instead. (hehe) |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sat Oct 13, 2007 4:33 am
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that's...it?
We're meant to make our own imagined story on how they fell together, in the last minutes of life?
But it's sweet though... |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Thu Feb 21, 2008 12:14 pm
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| That was so wonderful I'm crying. Very well written, absolutely beautiful. Thank you for that glimpse into Mordor. |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007 Reviews: 110
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:43 pm
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| Wow, what a surreal but excellent story. Very well written. Who would have thought that one could fall in love with the dark lord himself. |
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