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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sat May 05, 2007 9:41 pm
Beautiful sentiment and symmetry. I would expect as much: ponderings, if not second thoughts. Very close to the characters, I think. (Formatting-wise, I'd delete those oOo's throughout... on first glance, I thought they were literally saying, "Oooh!" right in the middle of a serious poem. Kinda threw me off.)
 
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Aeode

Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Reviews: 52
Location: Solemn Sea
Thu May 10, 2007 10:51 pm
Very beautifully worded =] This poem has great thought!
 
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