Reviews for "Little White Lies"

Tue May 22, 2007 7:31 pm

interesting story. I look forward to more.

Thu May 24, 2007 11:03 pm

This is so sad from the beginning.... tragic and disturbing....

Fri May 25, 2007 8:06 am

Great chapter. Poor Pilloth. Legolas took the news of her son well. I wonder how he would take the rest.

Sun May 27, 2007 3:38 pm

good story..very sad. i hope to read more!

Mon May 28, 2007 8:40 am

dont stop writing this story. i really like this...... =)

Thu May 31, 2007 12:54 am

This is very good. I will be watching for furthur updates. I hope they both can find some happy middle ground for the both of them. It is like they find each other only to lose each other. I hope not.

Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:20 pm

This is an excellent story! The plot is unusual (in a good way), the characters realistic and, I have to admit, I love your writing style; it's very refreshing. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens now that Pilloth saw Legolas kissing Nethel!

Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:35 pm

It is interesting... keep posting Smile smiley face

Thu Jul 19, 2007 11:46 am

What a place to finish on! This is a difficult subject, but is written well. Looking forward to seeing the next part. x

Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:04 am

Funnily enough, you had stated in your initial synopsis of this story that Legalos was going to help her overcome her hardships and that it was going to end happily. I don't think either happened in this story. This is definitely not a happy Romance story, definitely more Angst, and some sort of warning would have been appreciated.
Also, Legalos doesn't seem to be in character here. I don't think he would have ever been this cold and careless with another's feelings.

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