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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Reviews: 34
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:59 am
This lovely, poignant piece was beautifully written. Bravo!

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:26 pm
I really liked this piece and would encourage you to add space between paragraphs for an easier read to the eye.

Logan's reaction in the beginning of the piece was touching and by all rights, warrented. His feral side intermixing with his human logic was a nice clash. One part unclear: Does he really toss Jean's body to Hank? When I read that, I read it as a quick, angry movement and wasn't sure if I was interpretting correctly.

Good Logan piece overall.
 
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