Reviews for "Fëanorian Fates Series ~ Part 2"

Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:13 pm

This is brilliant, Al. In so few words, you've captured grief, loss, hate, rage, suffering, madness and the tragedy of the brothers.

They faced their final moments (and I think Maglor did that too somehow predicting what his fate would be like and begging his father for forgiveness) realizing what they had done and at what expense. Their finality came to them offering no peace, but more torment, and it was in my opinion perfectly emphasized in the 1st drabble.

You have become one with the evil that once wore you in an iron crown; my torturer, my enemy.

This line gave me chills.

Wonderful, emotional piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.

Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:49 am

Alassante has found the perfect tiny, but momentous moment in which to capture her (anti)heroes. These small but operatic moments - of clarity, of discovery, of choice or lack of same - are exactly what drabbles are made for.

Sun Jun 24, 2007 3:06 pm

If anyone asks me I'll be the first to admit I'm not a real die-hard fan of the sons of Feanor. But thanks to the stories such as yours I can understand them better. If anyone asks me to point them to a great fiction centered of the 'magnificent seven' I'll most certainly show them the way to your story.

Splendidly done, Al. Thank you for writing it Smile smiley face

Sun Jun 24, 2007 10:30 pm

Cool, good work!

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