Reviews for "Ocean's Song: Part 1"

Mon Jun 18, 2007 6:03 pm

I am curious where this is going and why this elf (?) is seeking Gaerlinn out for a purpose.. Well it feels that way. This is a great first chapter!

Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:09 am

Yesterday I was catching up with chapter 2 and 3 and thought... hmmm let's hope for an update soon. Smile smiley face

Ancient Nestad/Numenel watching over Gaerwen, the plot thickens leaving me wondering and wanting to know how he will aid her to reach her purpose.... And ah Radagast, I wonder what explanation he can provide for Yavanna once they meet.

Sat Jun 23, 2007 8:43 am

I love your story so far. And Chapter 7----wow---that was one of the best NC-17 scenes I have read. Next to Nestad, Legolas is chopped liver!

Sat Jun 23, 2007 3:49 pm

Wow, even though I was reading your chapters as you wrote them, I'm still absolutely stunned at how excellent your story is coming...and that NC-17 love scene..woo! I think we're both in love with Nestad Smile smiley face

! I guess the Maia's know their stuff! I can't wait for the other NC-17 scenes to be written, since I know they will be just as saucy. Great job, and keep it up!

Wed Jun 27, 2007 1:37 am

Okay, where to start? Yesterday, I read the entire story in one go, and I'd like to tell you that you have a great talent for crafting an intriguing tale. I couldn't stop reading Smile smiley face

This is a very skilfully written story, and the characters are well developed. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. You gave us quite a cliffhanger in chapter 11, so yeah, please update soon Very Happy smiley face

Great stuff! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Best wishes,
Binka

Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:03 am

I asked for an update, and there it is. Lucky me Wink smiley face

Now, the tension between Legolas and Nestad and the emotion were palpable. I hope they find Gaerlinn soon.

Well done Smile smiley face

Mon Jul 09, 2007 1:27 pm

Update, pretty please...? I'm so looking forward to reading more. Smile smiley face

Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:33 pm

I'm so hooked on this story! I love it, it's completely new and really refreshing. Such a cliffhanger though ... I'm going out of my mind wanting to know what happens next?! Eagerly looking forward to book 2. xx

Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:49 am

Update soon! The cliffhanger thing is cruel!

Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:04 pm

I have deeply enjoyed this story so far. And look forward to the next part with great anticipation. Sue Wink smiley face

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