You certainly have a good insight into the workings of a young man’s mind – and body. And I can’t believe Gondorian young men were any different than any others! LBJ
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:50 am
This was a very enjoyable piece about a very cocky Faramir finding his reprieve. The shades of Boromir even popped up here, the traces of nobility was quite palpable. I think however you need to go over this piece again to correct typos and such to give it the final touch it deserves.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sun Jun 24, 2007 2:14 pm
I liked your story very much. It was a very enjoyable, well written piece Thank you for sharing.
felis1215
Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
Tue Feb 19, 2008 5:12 pm
Nice... its not often we get sex from a man's POV. Very enjoyable.