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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:39 am
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Hey! I'm so glad to see this story posted here! And I'm really happy that you decided to venture into the elves' realm 
Now, you've got such a heart-wrenching story here. I already told you that I verged on bursting into tears while reading these first chapters. I'm so looking forward to reading more of this.
Thank you tons for sharing. Great start!  |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 4:44 pm
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| This was really good, I'd love to see more of it. Pretty please update? |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:59 pm
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| Wonderful story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. The character's feelings are described so vividly. I hope to see more of it soon. |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 9:31 pm
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| Oh! The suspense! I do so love the descriptions. The sights, sounds, and smells make me feel like I am there. I am so glad to see this update, and I can't wait for more! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
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Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:48 pm
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Oh good grief! Now I'm on the very edge of my seat. I hope you're going to update pretty soon 
This was a very good chapter. I love the imagery and the tension in the surroundings when the twins found out the goblins waited for them. Celebrian's hazy memories made a really heart-wrenching bit. The detailed descriptions simply transported me to the story at the very beginning of the chapter.
Very well done! I look forward to reading more. Thanks for updating. |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:06 am
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Write more quickly, I want to keep reading! Looking forward to the next chapter. |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:30 pm
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| Be still my heart! Wow. That was so intense. Talk about being on the edge of my seat! Well, I don't guess I need to tell you that I will be waiting for the next installment with bated breath. Great job. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:05 am
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Goodness! Are you trying to kill me?! Very good chapter. I loved that bit about the horses teaming up in battle. Looking forward to the next part. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sun May 18, 2008 1:03 pm
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This new chapter is a fine combination of suspense and relief. And now I wonder about Celebrian's condition (you've portrayed her wondefully, you know? ), and what will happen next, and I have this strange feeling -- despite the last bit, which sort of eased the mood. Excellent read, my dear! Keep up the great work! |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Tue May 20, 2008 5:02 pm
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| Oh, beautiful! Poor Elrond. I could feel his pain as he first set eyes on his poor wife. I love the way you have Lark come in and handle Celebrian so expertly. I had to work really hard to keep back the tears. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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