Reviews for "Gif he on þreat cymeð. (If He with Threat Comes.)"
You must be logged in to leave a review
| Author | Review |
|---|
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
|
|
Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:58 am
|
|
|
O! They're back! Morwen and Gamling are back, folks! 
Honestly, it's actually the second time you surprise me today, and it's such a wonderful surprise!
This is a great start. The new characters promise fun, especially the witty Lily (lovely exchange with Walda, btw), and oh the second chapter  I can't get rid of the bow metaphor, you know, since that day I read this chap for the first time. Hehe, I've got a thing for archers 
Excellent read my dear! Keep up the awesome work |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
Fantasia
Joined: 26 Jul 2004
Reviews: 8
Location:
|
|
Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:21 pm
|
|
|
| Awww... probably among the sweetest lovestories I've ever read/watched! Moulin Rouge included! this is just so... lovely! keep up the good work and keep updating! You have to give them a proper ending after all this... or well, give me a proper ending so that I can live happily ever after! but anywho, love your stories! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
|
|
Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:01 am
|
|
|
Awwww, he indeed has now something to think about.
Beautifully done, my dear. You've brought the social and cultural differences between Gamling's and Morwen's lives (and people) very well. It was a great insight into Gamling's feelings toward Morwen and his thoughts about the future and fate of his own land.
Thanks for updating. I'm looking forward to reading more.
(((hugs))) |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Cuthalion
Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
|
|
Mon May 19, 2008 7:22 am
|
|
|
"The days of it standing proud, blond head high in the sun like the people it sheltered were gone, all because a snake, a worm… a toad in the guise of a man, had crawled within and spread his poison straight to the heart of not just a building, but a whole people."
Very good! And poor Gamling - how dificult it must be for him to KNOW instead of merely presuming, if the knowledge troubles him so much! But here's hope that he will learn that seeing the truth is better than staying in the dark. And he will certainly not stop loving her! |
|
|
_________________
Last edited by Cuthalion on Mon May 19, 2008 6:16 pm |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Live Journal Feed
