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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:18 pm
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| Wheee! Severus on a beach livin it up on Dumbledore's dime! That's totally how it should have ended! lol Loved this line: "I can stopper death and brew glory." Utter goodness. |
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ZeeDrippyVessel

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 95
Location: deep south
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:37 pm
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Viv said
Wheee! Severus on a beach livin it up on Dumbledore's dime! That's totally how it should have ended! lol Loved this line: "I can stopper death and brew glory." Utter goodness.
As far as I'm concerned, that's how it ended! Jo just didn't have time to write it... (that line was pretty much lifted from her... I admit it!)
Thank you for reading - this was a great little ice breaker after not writing for almost a year... |
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LouiseP
Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Reviews: 12
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Sat Jul 28, 2007 9:50 pm
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hehe! what a romp! i would love to see snape in leather anything or even at disney world! delightful!
now go write some gamling and aefre smut! |
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loststarlight

Joined: 13 Aug 2007 Reviews: 3
Location: Kent, UK
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:19 pm
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Te he. This is now my Snape cannon. Go Snape in the USA! Much better ending to the story. Thanks for writing the alternative.  |
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eiranae

Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
Location: Just to the left of barmy.
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Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:20 am
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| This is what should have happened. Poor Snape. After all he went through, he deserves some happiness. Great story. |
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Mei

Joined: 25 Apr 2004 Reviews: 8
Location: San Diego CA
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Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:36 pm
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| Hallo dearest! Beach, eh? West or East? You know, we could teach him to surf...Hee hee...That was GREAT! |
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:57 pm
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| I do love the idea of this ending. In fact, the most enjoyable part for me was how easily Snape manipulated his fate and situation in the beginning. Great idea!! |
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:55 am
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Oooh. Much better ending than snake food! I could see Severus fitting in well in the Keys-- sand in his shoes, any oddnesses just accepted as part of 'people being people', lots of sun and sand and scantily clad women, and alligators to keep the nosy neighbors away. I love it. |
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HaldirHermione
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 4
Location: Ohio
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Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:01 am
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| This is a great twist on the end of the Harry Potter series. I loved how you have Severus surviving and slipping away. Great story! |
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Gwaelinn
Joined: 03 Mar 2014 Reviews: 2
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Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:20 pm
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You never told me you wrote Snape!! What a lovely surprise on this rather stressful evening. needed a good honest Snape story. So, will there be another story? About his time in America? I think that would be fun!! You have just fed my Muse--thank you very much--like I don't have enough bunnies hopping around my head.
As always, wonderful writing 
~G |
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