Very strong Snape voice, and I can believe the scene. I can believe that Lily would want to patch things up, that Snape would meet her attempts with caustic suspicion (he always did say just the wrong thing to her, didn't he?). The details were very nice: the feel of magic as she passed through the charms, the wetness of her shoes, the dust in his house, the light behind his eyes. Excellent mood piece.
eiranae
Joined: 21 Mar 2006 Reviews: 116
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Fri Sep 14, 2007 11:19 am
Very believable. I really felt sorry for them both. Great story.