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Shaylee7
Joined: 11 Jan 2006
Reviews: 18
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Fri Aug 03, 2007 9:43 pm
This was a creative way to begin your story. I am assuming you are going to cover all of the characters you have mentioned and their stories? I like your writing style and look forward to reading more!
 
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Sat Aug 04, 2007 6:34 pm
Whooeee! This is going to interesting! Finally a real story.
 
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eyesofsky
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Reviews: 5
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Fri Aug 24, 2007 10:15 am
Aha, now this is an exciting premise! Just a few notes on spelling etc: think it should be "nigh on" instead of "neigh" in the paragraph about separating Haldir from his brothers and... there was something else but I seem to have forgotten what it was! Never mind, it didn't detract from the storytelling. I'm excited to read on.
 
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