Reviews for "The Cross-Eyed Bear"
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:01 pm
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| You know Nancy, I just can see Mal walking away, his hands tucked behind the suspenders with that smirk that is just so him. Just that look in his eyes and with the thoughts you write. Typically Mal, knowing he got Jayne's attention fully now. |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:25 am
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| Replete with wisdom Mal-style: "can’t put a steak down in front of a good dog and think he won’t bite." Ain't it the truth! You do have a way with the Firefly voice. |
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:39 pm
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Excellent Mal capture! (and Jayne through Mal's eyes of course too!). Well done and how about some more?  |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:21 am
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| That's just how Mal would think of that, well done! Loved it. |
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