Reviews for "Pride"

Mon Sep 24, 2007 2:49 am

I rather enjoyed the realism of this. Your description of the meal was ace and also you brought home the desolation of Meduseld with Grima in residence. No songs - no stories etc. Well done. LBJ.

Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:39 am

What a surprise! This is a superb continuation, Neu Very Happy smiley face

I can echo the above review, and I can also say that you've done a great job portraying Gamling in a tough moment of his life. It adds a lot to his characterization. Also, I like Morwen's reaction when she saw him, in the end of the chapter. Very well done! Eagerly waiting for the next part Very Happy smiley face

Tue Sep 25, 2007 10:26 pm

Powerful stuff, as usual. Smile smiley face

I'm glad I caught this one early and I'll be interested to follow along.

Mon Oct 22, 2007 1:17 pm

Alrighty, now Brand is not only cute, but also brave Smile smiley face

But you know, I got a little uneasy when Gamling thought, I hope he lives to grow up. I know those were tough times, and so on, but it saddened me a bit... Okay, I'll stop babbling now Wink smiley face

Anyway, this was a chapter full of tension, and I tried hard not to look back over my shoulder. I knew there was no one there, but hey, you set the mood of this chapter so well that I almost felt there was indeed someone there watching me from the corner of my room. I bet it had everything to do with Grima, who emerged from the shadows like a ghost. And even if he didn't say a word, it was enough to bring uneasiness, and a chill on my spine. Loved the game of chess between Theoden and Gamling too Very Happy smiley face

Great job! I'm looking forward to more.

Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:58 am

So you completed another part of your wonderful saga Smile smiley face

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment, pretty please.

Very well done, as always. Thank you, Neu Very Happy smiley face

Great job!

Mon May 19, 2008 3:06 pm

You let your readers feel the growing tension in Meduseld quite clearly; it burdens the heart to see the slow fall of a proud kingdom under shadow and despair. Brand (even with his terrible story to tell) is uplifting, though. Can't wait to read the next tale!

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