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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:17 am

Oh I so enjoyed the wedding preparations and the wedding from Rimallen's perspective. You wove a wonderful chapter and ended on a bittersweet note - Rimallen recognizing that she has found her heart's mate in Thranduil but now despairing that they will ever come together. Thanks for the chapter!
 
Author's replied on Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:34 am
I think we needed something sweet and cuddly after all the war and drama <3 Elrond finally got what he wanted, now it's our dear Princess' turn. Thanks for reviewing! Smile smiley face
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:44 pm

Wow, after traveling for awhile - I returned to a treat of two chapters. What a breathtaking tale you have spun. I loved the banter between Thranduil and Rimallen - and the anticipation that they would dance. But the nedrilach, a love dance shared by soul mates, that was so unexpected and creative. What a wonderfully romantic twist. - And yet he did not kiss her yet, recognizing the innocence in her gaze, though their fea already sung out to each other! A fine culmination!
 
Author's replied on Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:59 am
I'm glad you like the story so far! The nedrilach scene was actually the first piece I wrote for this story, back in 2007, even if it has been heavily edited and revised now. And well, I think it's safe to say Thranduil does know how to be romantic! He isn't a complete brute after all.
Thanks for reviewing. Smile smiley face
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:37 pm

What a place to leave off! They are destined for each other and are finally beginning to recognize it. Then to through in a goblin attack the day after Yule. (A smart time, if the goblins really planned it.).

I loved your story about Thranduil's grandparents. Though, I do quite wonder who they were, as Oropher was from Doriath. I thought he was the first King of Greenwood. No matter, the story is so romantic - seems that Thranduil holds many surprises if he actually though about and ordered Galion to pull out the white dress. Loved the part of Rimallen helping Thranduil with his armor and their parting. But now Rimallen will need to make use of the Queen's armor! Will Thranduil return in time? Can't wait for more!
 
Author's replied on Sun Nov 29, 2009 3:51 am
Goblins can be quite smart, pesky little creatures can't they? They can be so annoying, and right now we have a whole bunch of them heading for the palace! But don't worry, I'm working on chapter twenty-six fast so hopefully it'll be up soon. As for Thranduil's grandparents, I left all the options open because I never really say anything too defining. Thanks for reading! Smile smiley face
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allibxtr
Joined: 27 Nov 2009
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 1:34 pm

I really enjoy this story! I hope you will update soon!
 
Author's replied on Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:33 am
Thank you! I'm glad you like it Smile smiley face I hope to work on the next chapter soon.
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Sun May 02, 2010 4:00 pm

Beautiful! A fitting wedding for a royal pair.!
 
Author's replied on Mon May 03, 2010 1:26 am
Thank you! Smile smiley face
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:19 am

A most poignant and beautifully written story. Much of it had my eyes filled with tears. A very fitting epilogue. Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:58 am
A belated, but heart-felt thank you! Smile smiley face
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