Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Wed Nov 14, 2007 7:13 pm
That was so sad you made me cry!
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Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Sun Nov 18, 2007 6:08 pm
Jael, I enjoyed this story very, very much. I like the interplay between Thranduil and Galion as they both adjust to their new roles and I love that Thranduil is doing whatever he can to save as many of his men as possible - even if it means risking himself. I was horrified when Galion's son died and yet those are the things that make any story real - seeing the characters suffer like that.
My only quibble was showing Erestor in such a bad light! I like him and to see him so petty hurt. *sniff*
A thoroughly enjoyable story.
p.s. - the Erestor remark was very much tongue-in-cheek. I thought I should add that since you don't really know me.