Reviews for "At the Mercy of a Burning Coal"

Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:22 pm

Very interesting.

Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:45 pm

Interesting start. I wonder who the cloaked man is.

Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:58 pm

Oooh. She makes her escape. I wonder who it is that follows her.

Wed Dec 05, 2007 1:45 pm

Dang, her poor horse must be shattered! I own a thoroughbred ex hunter and he can only manage a couple of fields, so can I come to think of it. Slow them down! Nowt wrong with walking.
Good story. Hope there's going to be some romance eventually!

Sat Dec 08, 2007 11:13 am

Excellent story overall! I hope you will update soon.

One question...can she really hold down that elf? Oh, wait...never mind...the dagger does its job then.

Sun Dec 09, 2007 8:14 am

Brilliant! I love the naive way Lathwan and Lily are planning to 'rescue' womankind from the clutches of men. Please keep updating, Iove this.

Thu Dec 13, 2007 5:15 pm

Cool! I love your running commentary- (Bad reasoning on their part…). I'm praying you're not one of those people who starts updating super quickly, then teeters off. Really hope this is going to be a Glorfindel romance, he's my fave character.

Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:31 am

Good chapter, I liked Sarethiel, I think you portrayed her in a way Tolkien would've approved of for an elf; happy, merry and friendly. Though the whole Lindariel thing was a bit random- she might've kidded herself about loving Glorfindel, but elves aren't cruel by nature, so you should probably tone down her attitude to Sarethiel.

The way you described the adorable twins was lovely.

One more little thing- She-elf is a derrogatory term- kind of like calling a woman a bitch. Elf-maid or elf-maiden is the correct term

All in all, great job!

Mon Dec 24, 2007 8:38 pm

rofl...poor glorfy

Tue Dec 25, 2007 6:35 am

Brilliant, best chapter yet. I love the idea of all the elf-maids being stirred to travel for adventure.

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