Joined: 30 Oct 2003 Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Thu Nov 27, 2003 10:05 am
Very good story.
I love what I read.
Sivan
EveningNightshade
Joined: 14 Jun 2003 Reviews: 22
Location: Scotland
Sun Nov 30, 2003 9:13 am
I throughly enjoyed this story. Being a Maglor fan, I felt you did a good job of portraying him. Little Elros was so cute, I just wanted to hug him. I love how you opened the story with Elros' memories of his mother - it just added to his torment when he realised that Ada Maglor was gone too. Good work!
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon May 10, 2004 11:35 am
Beautiful! It was a wonderful story; enchanting and sweet!